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Sunday 25 March 2012

Some of our second 100 word challenges!

Our second 100 word challenge was this picture, and included these words:


Carefully
Gold
Bright
Clear
Happiness

Here are some of our attempts:

Phillip was bored. He had been stuck on an island in the middle of the sea for 1 and a half years. When Phillip saw some seaweed he picked it up and decided that he could have it for his tea. But when he grabbed it he saw something under it. There sitting on the gold sand was a clear bottle. The bright sun reflected off the shiny bottle. As Phillip carefully opened the letter he was filled with joy and happiness. The letter he had opened wasn’t a letter,but it was a map!

By Reece

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Shelly and she lived on her own on a sandy island. One sunny day a message in a bottle arrived on the edge of the sand. The gold bright sun was shining and happiness broke upon her. Carefully she read the message she smelt roses she felt love she heard seagulls and she tasted romance. She had a love letter!!! She didn’t know what to do there was no one el’s with her. Should she send one back? She will decide.

By Eve F


1 comment:

  1. What fantastic writing Reece and Eve! I really enjoyed reading it because you used great describing words and phrases.

    I can't wait to read some more of your hundred word challenges. Keep up the good work!

    From Miss BB

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