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Sunday, 25 March 2012

Some of our first 100 word challenges!


As we mentioned a week ago on the blog - to help improve our writing and typing skills, each week we will be undertaking a 100 word challenge.



Our first picture was a scary looking street, and our 5 words included: Shadows, Carefully, Darkness, Clouds, Moon.

Here's some of our first attempts:


I walked down a dark alleyway, with the shadows tapping on my fragile back.  The moon was so dull it was like it had been lit and carefully blown out by a giant. The grey clouds were looming in around me as I started to run to the mask shop.  The lady inside was old and had a bundle of the most exqiusite, delicious cakes.  She let me take a bag with me. I told her about the clouds that had chased me down the old, creaky, scary road.  I  now hate the darkness.


By Georgia


A man walked down a street, the shadows crept bhind him. The wind howled like wolves in a pack. The moon shone brightly it was like it was sitting on the clouds. The gloomy darkness made it hard to see. He carefully crept behind a wall he could hear the voice of 'Blood' the leader of a bad gang. Then the lights started to flicker "zap zzz" he could hear screaming of people then he saw a light moving. It was just his imagination he made it out of the street alive.


By Callum

I was walking in complete darkness. Suddenly I turned around and ghostly shaped shadows were following me. I ran away so fast I tripped over and I stayed hidden in the dark clouds. The moon shone right next to me and a creepy, brown, hairy werewolf attacked me. Then I fell to the ground. I was shocked and in horror but then a witch flew over me and carefully sprinkled me in glitter. Just then I started flying so fast but I fell to the ground. Suddenly I shot back up into the air flying past the birds and a massive aeroplane.


By Sharna

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