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Saturday, 7 April 2012

Easter 100 Word Challenge by Gillian

The sun was peeking up over the fence.  The little girl said to her brother “Look at those paw prints and all those chocolate eggs and rabbits”, her brother led her downstairs and followed the paw prints. “Shhh” he said, as they crept around the house. They found the Easter Bunny.  He said “you can have a ride around the street on my Easter carriage”.  He dropped the little girl and her brother home.  He gave them two fluffy white rabbits.  They called them “Easter” and “Chocolate”.  He also gave them a big chocolate rabbit.  The chocolate rabbit melted in the sun, it was all sticky and gooey.

3 comments:

  1. well done Gilly graet adjectives

    Miesha

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  2. Gillian, this is a charming 100wc entry, you've clearly taken care over your choice of words and even managed to use speech. I winder if you could emphasise the link between the sun peeking up at the beginning, and the rabbit melting at the end.

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