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Saturday 7 April 2012

Easter 100 Word Challenge by Josh F

There was a little boy called Bob and he was given a gigantic chocolate rabbit for Easter from his grandparents.  Bobs friend Ralph came to ask him to play so Bob put the chocolate rabbit on the windowsill and said to his dog “DO NOT EAT MY EASTER RABBIT, OK!!” and then he went outside to play in the sunshine.  When he returned hours hater he noticed that the chocolate rabbit had melted in the sun, and had turned into a gloopy puddle of chocolate on the windowsill, Bob ran quickly to get his mum and said “Mum my rabbit has melted please help me scoop him up”.

Josh F

2 comments:

  1. Hello Josh! I love your rhyming of gloop & scoop.I also like the way you brought the dog in with the warning!
    It is so good to see your work on the 100WC. Do join again!

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  2. i like the bit with the dog in that was the best part

    From L.A

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